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PeeWee.Inc
Senior Member
United Kingdom
1893 Posts |
 Posted - 07 April 2003 : 12:16:06
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Well, i was kinda bored so i thought i would take my hand to doin a poem, as i have never done one before and this is what the outcome was:
so yo smoking the skunk?
It's just not giving yo that bunk?
you love the weed
yo still feeling that need
this is where we move to brown
This shits goin to get you down.
put that **** in yo arm
come on brother, there int no harm.
now your really feeling that need
wishing you was still on that weed.
yo lifes really goin down hill?
this is what we call the brown mill.
You goin to start stealing
bet you wish you was only dealing.
now it's 20 years down the line
yo ass is now mine.
it's every min of every day
bet you wish you could keep me at bay.
you only just scored
whats that, your still getting bored?
Lifes now starting to look up for you
only just now you know what to do.
old turkey is the only way
You cant have that **** till may.
your staring to be sick
hearing everyone take the mick.
may comes and your off that stuff.
you got a girl and the worlds looking great
Whats that, you cant even wait?
it's half past 8 and your getting out of bed
whats this **** your feeling in your head?
your choughing up some blood
you know what it is but you dont wanna admitt it.
"whats up doc, is it bad"
"you just dont wanna know my lad"
"come on G!"
"man you got H.I.V"
Do any of you have a flair for poems? |
De Priofundus Calmo Ad Te Damine |
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silent_frosty
Junior Member
USA
178 Posts |
Posted - 08 April 2003 : 11:33:56
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| Hey, I'm not too good at poems, but you should put some music to that and rap it :), I think it'd sound pretty good |
Life is a waste of time. Time is a waste of life. So get wasted all of the time and have the time of your life. |
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